Post by SolarBlaze on Jun 12, 2014 21:29:52 GMT -5
Thanks. Like I said, I always try to keep them as in-character as possible.
Here's another preview, but I'm thinking of saving this one for the thirteenth chapter.
Tatanga: Throughout my line of work as a mercenary, I’ve ended up earning enough money to not only last me a lifetime, but to fund the resources you see before you; the very ones that I intend to use to begin my reign over this kingdom! For real this time!
Daisy: I should’ve figured, but why now all of a sudden? Shouldn’t you be happy with your well-paying job as a mercenary?
Tatanga: Yes, but despite all the wealth I’ve obtained, I still began to feel as if something was missing. After recalling the aforementioned incident, I’ve come to realize that this “something” was the thrill, the rush I felt while posing as an intergalactic dictator! The desire for power, the thought of having people working for me, being mere playthings for my amusement… It was the ultimate, indescribable joy! It was right then and there when I decided that I’d like to become a real, full-time intergalactic emperor! First, Sarasaland, then the world, and finally, the entire universe!!! EE HEE HEE HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!
Tiptron MKII: Okay, so in other words, it’s because you’re a lunatic. Got it.
Last Edit: Jul 24, 2014 8:57:46 GMT -5 by SolarBlaze
Post by SolarBlaze on Jun 13, 2014 21:23:55 GMT -5
That was done before then. Daisy and Tiptron were in a desperate situation, and they had little choice but to accept help from Antasma. Of course, his reason for helping them was solely out of spite towards Bowser, for obvious reasons. It was a win-win situation for all of them: Daisy and Tiptron were able to escape the dungeon that they were thrown in, so they could continue their plans of rescuing Peach and other Mushroom Castle prisoners, as well as finding the evidence that they need to expose Dimentia and Dimention's true intentions, and Antasma gets to have his revenge.
Last Edit: Jul 15, 2015 19:55:37 GMT -5 by SolarBlaze
Post by SolarBlaze on Jun 14, 2014 12:58:05 GMT -5
In case you're wondering how Antasma knew about their predicament, it's because there was a Dream Point in the dungeon, and he ended up getting a glimpse of a nightmare that Daisy had about Bowser and Peach's wedding (since the latter was under the influence of a love potion that Dimentia gave to the former). From there, Antasma ended up taking advantage of the situation and offered his help, since he saw that was the perfect opportunity to get back at Bowser.
Post by SolarBlaze on Jun 14, 2014 16:19:40 GMT -5
HAHAHAHAHAHA. That's a pretty funny idea, but what I had in mind was something along the lines of this:
Antasma: *Enters Dimension D via a dream portal* Bowser! Circumstances haff changed! Just this vunce, I vill cooperate vith you, but heed my vords... I haff not finished exacting my revenge upon you! SKREEEONK!
Bowser: Fine, whatever. Do what you want then, batface.
Antasma: After you, Princess... SKREEEP!
Peach: Why, thank you. *Enters*
*Antasma goes through shortly afterwards and closes the portal the moment Bowser gets close to it*
Bowser: What the...!? Why, that little...! Antasma, you'll pay for this! YOU HEAR ME!? YOU'LL PAAAAAAAY!
Post by SolarBlaze on Jun 14, 2014 19:14:18 GMT -5
Heh heh, yeah, I just might.
Also, after the heroes defeat Bowser in battle, they question him as to why he entertained the thought of Dimentia and/or Dimention being trustworthy, despite their obvious connection to Dimentio, and he responds with:
Bowser: I was blackmailed, okay!? Those clowns... They both got ahold of some personal information of mine that would've ruined me if it ever got out, so I had no choice but to let them into the Koopa Troop!
Antasma: Vut information vould that be? Those "Peach doesn't like me" entries? SKREEEK!
Bowser: WHAT!? You read my-...! I mean, I have NO CLUE what you're talking about!
Last Edit: Jun 14, 2014 19:16:04 GMT -5 by SolarBlaze